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Viking girl
Jess [ or the viking girl ] was going to a fancy dress up party with her two friends. When she got there she was greeted by one of her friends and her mother. She asked if she wanted some of the delicious chocolate and vanila cake that was sitting on the stand practically shining, it was just what she needed! She got a tenth of
The cake which is a pretty good portion I would say. When her other friend arrived she was just finishing off her cake and when her friend got a portion she got a ninth. When she saw this her nose screwed up  like nails and her ears went maroon, the rest of them saw this brewing in her face, a little bit of drool came out of here open mouth befo...WAAAAAAAAAAAA SHE GOT A BIGGER CAKE!! I WANT MORE LIKE HER WAAAAAAAAAA. The Mum tried to calm her down by giving her a teeny tiny piece of cake but she didn't care. Eventually she had to call her parents and on the way home she had a nasty frown wiped onto her face to whole drive back.

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Selfie Writing - 1st Draft Tom

BANZAI!!

I was greeted by a group of men while boarding my airplane, my airplane was a Japanese a6m zero, perfect for the job i’m about to do. They help me get into my aircraft and start the engine. My death poem makes me feel better all pilots from our regiment were told to write a death poem, mine reads: Duty comes heavier than a mountain, death comes as light as a feather. They salute me when I taxi down the runway and take off, knowing that this is the last memory of land the rest will just be sea. Fred my mate in the regiment we flew next to each other and looked at each other but not in a casual way. We just stared at one another with bloodshot eyes the ships come into sight and then the loud bang and crunch of the AA guns on the ships. Fred gets nailed by 2 two 303 browning machine guns and his head flunks on his instrument panel. I aim my plane up and take  my arms of the stick, wrap them around my chest as the noise gets louder.