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Hi my name is Tom i'm 10 years old [turning 11 in August] and i'm posting things about my work on this blog

Wednesday 31 May 2017

100 word story

I must be able to see evidence of YOU having asked for feedback AND making changes to improve your work. That means you have FOLLOWED the SUCCESS CRITERIA
Choose your favourite 100 word story and selfie writing and post on your blog.100 word story
I was a baker [ yes I was ] at a place called baker bob's, one time a customer came and ordered something of the new employee so I asked him, what are you eating? And he said something from one of the bakers he said and so I said “ oh well how does it taste?”Well how should it taste?! “ he said with a bit of aggression.

I decided to leave him alone but when I did he started to turn green “ Is there something wrong with it or is it you I said “ and with that he just walked out of the shop.